How Do My Google AdWords Look?

[Paradigm]

I'd like to get some advice on whether or not my ad looks captivating or not, or how I should be improving it. I'm selling a money-making eBook that is selling quite well right now I believe. In any case, here it is:

Make Money At Home Now
Earn $1000+ With Just 2hrs/Day
Of Work. Make $ While You Sleep!


I'm also using some keywords right now such as:
'how to make lots of money' - 0.13 cents
'make big money' - 0.13 cents
'make money fast from home' - 0.13 cents

On average per Google AdWords campaign, how many Keywords do you guys usually have?

Also: I have over 100 keywords for my campaign right now, I have terrible position in them, it seems. What can be done to fix this problem? It ruins the conversion rate that's for sure.


Any kinds of input you can provide for this fellow Clickbanker would be greatly appreciated!

[investpro007]

Ok I see that you are toiling hard in a very saturated market.Do not bid higher for your key words.Your niche has a very very competitive market.

[ithilcity]

You need ads that are more effective, every one has ads like your.
For example:

You Are Extremely Ugly
So I Am. But I Also Extremely
Rich. Don't Be Ugly and Poor.

An ad like this is absolutely more eye-catching and can increase your ctr.
I have learned this tecnique on the rich jerk ebook.

[Morpheus]

I use Adwords and feel I am very successful with it. I spend about $500 a month and that usually brings in about $5000 - $6000 a month.

Make Money At Home Now
Earn $1000+ With Just 2hrs/Day
Of Work. Make $ While You Sleep!

Your ad sounds like a scam. Since I don't know what the offer is, I can't suggest an alternative ad.

You Are Extremely Ugly
So I Am. But I Also Extremely
Rich. Don't Be Ugly and Poor.

This one is just another take off on The Rich Jerk, and I think people have seen enough Adwords Ads like this one.

I recommend not going over 10-12 very "tight" keywords and bidding higher. I always bid high enough to be seen on the right hand side "above the fold". (So the viewer can see my ad without having to scroll.) I find the right hand side (first four) performs better than the top of the page "blue" ads. I usually start my bidding at $1.03 and move it up if necessary. Before you decide to change a bid up, let it "sit" for 24-48 hours to see where it settles in.

Your placement is determined on a number of factors....bid, conversion rate, and your overall adwords history. Too many non-performing keywords are going to hurt you.

Jim

[dan1st]

True, sounds very cheesy. Used all over the Internet.
Most ppl would just ignore it. Try some other more unique phrases.

[Paradigm]

Yeah. I forgot about Rich Jerk so I went back to the drawing board and made some new ads:

You Are Extremely Poor
I Am Not. I Am Extremely Rich.
Don't Be Poor. Earn Cash Now.

You Love Scams Eh?
You Are Losing Money While I Am
Making Money. Wanna Know Why?

Your Life Sucks.
Mine Doesn't Because I Am Rich.
Don't Be Pathetic. Earn Cash Now.

You Suck At Home Business
Quit Being Terrible. Learn
Something Useful. Find Out How.



Morpheus, is there any way I can contact you by any chance?

[Morpheus]

I replied to your PM with my email addy. If you go to my site in my sig and click contact, my phone number is there.

Jim